Every so often, or whenever I find an exceptionally deep song, I'm going to post the lyrics here and try and break them down for you the best I can. By doing this, hopefully I'll be able to reveal the depth I mentioned in my last post, as well as the rhyming genius that it takes to produce a true gem such as this; Ascend off the Sweatshop Union's self-titled album. Now what I'm looking for here in particular is rhyming schemes, flow, and metaphors/similes. For all intents and purposes, I'll be going off of a modified template from a website I'm a member at (
JeeJuh.com) that goes something like this:
1.
Rhyme Schemes [italics are individual rhymes, bolds are mutli-word rhymes,
green is miscellaneous patterns]
2.
Wordplay [aka deep bars and meaning; explained after]
3.
Metaphors/Similes4. Structure
5.
Flow
Also, there's a video at the bottom with the song in it.Ascend -- Sweatshop Union
"We are passing into a great change of
speciesAnd no matter how loudly the old
authoritiesmay proclaim that this is not so, it is going to happen
Our moment of time, when population reaches it's limit
and the world as we know it ends, is not about death at all
It is about ascending into a new kind of life
They only see to the
skyOur dreams and our
livesOur means to
surviveBut not between our
eyesWe gotta free our
minds and re-
design them
Seek and find the trees to climb high and
Read the signs between the linesDefeat the lies discreetly hiding
deep inside them
Sheep unite and
beat the tyrantLeave the island but keep smiling (smiling)
'Cause why
try to fit inTo this
life that has beenPre-planned to keep man in a cycle of
sinThe fight could have been
wonBut we sit
stunnedAs we get
drunk and forget once we were tricked
And now they can complete their
goal'Cause we're convinced that dung heaps are
goldPeople
sold to keep our
souls dug in
Deeper holes than we could know we're stuck in'Now something is wrong with that... don't you think?'
[Chorus:]
Life can be a sequence of precluded
opportunitiesjust like déjà vu that never endsIt seems our position as spirit
beingson this physical journey's to make our moves and then
ascendLife can be a sequence of precluded opportunities
just like déjà vu that never ends
It seems our position as spirit beings
on this physical journey's to make our moves and then ascend
I know sometimes it seems like it's some kind of dream, right?Some try to
scream and reach the sunshining
beamsBut the path is paved with
choices, and the
voices tell you
liesBut it's your choice, your life, don't wait for hell to
riseIt won't be televised in any
caseOn
any stations
anywaysMany wait for
many saviors
Many say that
any dayThe penny's they attempt to save will buy them
plenty acresAnd the
petty labor's every day's work's fruit can then be
savoredBelieve what you
choose to but I
refuse to
surrenderTo the people that rule you and their ruthless agendas
Spent a day away with
meDon't slave this week or
play the gameEnd the pain, I'll make you seeThe sacred tree and break the chainsLeave your alleys and streets, walk the valleys and peaks with me
This is all ours if you and I can just leave it be
Freedom is as easy as believing that we're one
Breathing it in deeply and the healing has begun[Chorus]
Until we change our ways
There's no fucking way they'll change their
waysManipulate our brains with the
airwavesOur kids will fa
ce the
same
shit when they're
slavesWhat gets me is they claim that it's fair
playBut label u
s in
sane if we dare
sayAnything that unlocks the staircase
So they can keep us locked in a scared stateYeah, but until I change my ways
There's no fucking way you'll change your ways
So we'll keep celebrating Earth Day
Even though it's clear it's merely wordplay
What gets me is I know that they can cure AIDS
'Cause they control the healthcare and the birthrate
Then indoctrinate us 'til we serve hate
And incarcerate us in this birdcage'And what frightens me is that... people are simply letting it happen'
[Chorus]
Sweatshop
You don't need to
believe itOr even
agree with itBut give yourself time to make memories then
leave itInnocent Bystanders"
1. Rhyme Schemes: What I really dig about this song is the intricate rhymes that are woven into it. When I first heard this song, I had to listen to it a few times just to pick up on all the things Sweatshop is trying to tell me here. Their end rhymes are standard just like any other hip-hop song, but their massive amount of multis makes this drop one-of-a-kind. It takes true skill to be able to spit something as real as this.
2. Wordplay: I wasn't quite sure how to title this part of the song, but I thought wordplay would work alright. You could call it depth I guess. But this song is all about the government keeping you down. Sweatshop Union is a Canadian group, meaning they live in a largely socialist country where the government runs a lot more companies/services that it does here in the U.S. The first highlighted section is just deep. Talking about your girl like that really puts things in perspective. It's all about putting animosity aside and just loving. Speaks deep to me, I don't know about you (good rhymes also). The next two highlighted sections are about the government keeping a man down. How they run everything but don't help the people. The government keeps everyone in a 'scared state' while controlling the 'birthrate' and spitting whack 'wordplay' to keep the people locked in their 'birdcage.' The line "cause they control the healthcare and the birthrate" is a direct reference to Canada's socialized medicine that uses the peoples' tax dollars as funding. Then the lines ending in "Earth day" and "wordplay" hints at the governments shady intentions. They use Earth Day as a cover to make it look like they're doing real work, but everyone knows they'll just keep funding the polluting corporations. Alright I've said enough, next section.
3. Metaphors/Similes: I was only able to pick a few metaphors and similes out of this piece because I actually find it to be pretty cryptic at times and I get blinded by the depth of this song. If you can find anymore, post them and I'll add them in.
4. Structure: This song is structured very well. There's an intro, 4 drops from each of the four members of the crew, then a conclusion that wraps it up really nice. This song isn't too short or too long, it's a good length where all of what Sweatshop wants to say is said without it getting stretched out too far and losing its meaning. The length is 4:47 for anyone who wants to know.
5. Flow: To get the flow you really have to listen to the song. My favorite part about it is that it's really chill and smooth. The mellow beat accentuates the lyrics, which are the focus in this piece. I've listened to this song many times and I've yet to notice and awkward verse, so the flow checks out with me.
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